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I couldn't believe my luck when I opened the letter from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Inside held my letter for my new assigned books but the light gleaming off my new Head Girl badge made me feel punch-drunk with giddiness. I stared at the badge for a good minute before reason found me. My legs carried me down the stairs as fast they could without tripping.

"Mom…Dad, it came. My letter came in", I yelled to my poor surprised parents.

My mom put down the plate of toast on the table and reached for the envelope and took out my book list.

"Oh Hermione, are you sure you are not taking too many classes?"

Her question stopped my gleefulness short as I ran through what classes I had this semester through my head.

"No, mom I do not think so. Besides Professor McGonagall told me it would be possible to pull off the load. Besides, it is my last year and there is still so much to learn about the magical world."

My dad walked over to my mom to check out the list for himself.

"Hmm, just make sure you don't fall behind dear. You're going to have to keep your nose to the grindstone to keep up with your duties."

Duties? "Oh, that reminds me." I held out my hand so my parents could not miss the perfect gold and scarlet badge resting majestically inside of my palm. I was very pleased when I heard my mom's squeal.

"You got it! You got the position of Head Girl. I am so proud of you."

My mom managed to get a quick hug in before my father picked me up and swung me around in his arms.

"You've been looking forward to this position since you started reading 'Hogwarts: A History'. I'm so proud of you."

I felt a little dizzy when he put me down, but luckily the chair at the breakfast table kept me from falling over.

"I am so happy. I can not wait to tell Ron and Harry", I exclaimed as I sat down to eat breakfast.

My parents sat down as well and my mom continued reading the rest of the letters from the school.

"There is a lot that you have to do as Head Girl, Hermione. This letter says that you have to head all of the meetings with the Head Boy, organize the prefects, monitor the halls at night, organize school functions and maintain an Outstanding or Exceeds Expectations in all of your classes. Dear, that is a lot of work."

"I know mom", I stated between bites of my toast and eggs, "but I can do it. I have been dreaming of this since the beginning and am so happy to have achieved it."

"This must be a big honor", my father stated.

"Yes, it is. This will also be the punch in the stomach the Slytherins need". I laughed to myself. "A muggle-born picked to represent the school".
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Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters and anything Harry Potter related is owned by J. K. Rowling.

This is a Draco/Hermione fanfic I have been working on for a while. I've decided to pick it up again. ^_^
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:iconmikisaywhat3738:
You are an excellent writer and I love Harry potter
I like that you tried to write it from Hermione's point of view
This book just makes me want to read more :love:
It's so beautiful
You should be a writer :D
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*princessaquarius Feb 19, 2011  Professional Writer
Wow. Thank you sooo much. I'm very happy you're enjoying "Mistaken". It's so much fun to write from Hermione's view point.
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Hermione is so smart in a fun way
You have a serious talent and again, I'll keep on reading :D
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=TakeABowXOXO Jan 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Harry, I flailed. :iconimhappyplz:
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*AlterEgo1629 Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this, the sense of getting to know them better! Awesome stuff.
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*princessaquarius Jan 23, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you very much. ^_^
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~Veniae Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this beginning and I look forward to the other parts. I would like to point out a few minor mistakes though.

First of all, "Inside held my letter for my new assigned books" sounds wrong to me. Probably "inside was" or something like that. :meow:

"My mom put down the plate of toast on the table and reached for the envelope and took out my book list." sounds off because of the double "and"s. You could separate the sentences or make something like "... reached for the envelope, taking out..."

"stopped my gleefulness short" ... Hm, why don't you say "cut my gleefulness short"?

"as I ran through what classes I had this semester through my head" The second "through" should be "in".

Hope I was helpful and not too harsh. Keep it up!
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*princessaquarius Jan 5, 2011  Professional Writer
No, criticism is much appreciated. How else am I to improve. Thank you. Also thank you for reading. ^_^
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~Veniae Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome~ :heart:
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:iconcheesscake:
Awesome, Do all the other parts too!! :)
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